Well I personally think the other critique was a bit harsh..? o v o
I really like how you drew the hair! It's just so flowy~
The lines are dark, but the lineart should stay the same amount of darkness for the entire body though...
and if you don't feel like drawing hands or are lazy (like me) just make the sleeves longer, do a chibi or put them behind her back? Or you can practise ;D
I also can't give you too much for originality since I've seen that bow on characters for a while I do like the pom poms though, and this style is just adorable! * 3 *
and add some shading.
okay 100 words I'm out xD
Yeah so did I :3
Thanks for the advice :3
And yeah I know but I like the bows :3